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He runs off the train,
Daddy is waiting behind him,
To return him to his loving mummy.
Daddy looks out the window,
Sadden by the view.
Knowing it will be while before they meet again.

As the train begins to speed away,
The little boy keeps waving to his daddy,
He is torn between,
His daddy going away,
And his mummy pulling him to leave.
©2005-2009 ~shadowedwintersun
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yes..im submitting something..woo

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wow that looks strange, great work :D

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:iconbraidy:
I said I liked in on Y!, and I still do! :lol: Short, sweet, simple (in a 'child thinking' sense), it's good. :nod:

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"You have a lovely smile, are they your teeth?"
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thx

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I shall give myself to the one i love,
my heart, my soul,
shall be his....
:heart: =braidy :heart:
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:)

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I shall give myself to the one i love,
my heart, my soul,
shall be his....
:heart: =braidy :heart:
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i like it :) it seems so innocent. and the little boy doesn't know about the undercurrents...=)

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Soul Sisters Of The Sisterhood
Sisters Not By Blood
But Of Souls We Share
Our Hearts Beats Together As One
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:)

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I shall give myself to the one i love,
my heart, my soul,
shall be his....
:heart: =braidy :heart:
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I really like this. Great stuff :heart:
Will check out the rest of your stuff :)
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A deep piece, very moving. It pains a sad picture all too easily. Nice poem.
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:) thanks

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I shall give myself to the one i love,
my heart, my soul,
shall be his....
:heart: =braidy :heart:

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