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Goodbye by ~shadowedwintersun:iconshadowedwintersun:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Children's > Open




He runs off the train,
Daddy is waiting behind him,
To return him to his loving mummy.
Daddy looks out the window,
Sadden by the view.
Knowing it will be while before they meet again.

As the train begins to speed away,
The little boy keeps waving to his daddy,
He is torn between,
His daddy going away,
And his mummy pulling him to leave.
©2005-2008 ~shadowedwintersun
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=sweet-666:iconsweet-666: May 15, 2005, 1:28:38 AM
wow that looks strange, great work :D

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=braidy:iconbraidy: May 15, 2005, 1:33:00 AM
I said I liked in on Y!, and I still do! :lol: Short, sweet, simple (in a 'child thinking' sense), it's good. :nod:

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~shadowedwintersun:iconshadowedwintersun: May 15, 2005, 2:01:28 AM
thx

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I shall give myself to the one i love,
my heart, my soul,
shall be his....
:heart: =braidy :heart:
~shadowedwintersun:iconshadowedwintersun: May 15, 2005, 2:01:41 AM
:)

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I shall give myself to the one i love,
my heart, my soul,
shall be his....
:heart: =braidy :heart:
~mysticsilverstar:iconmysticsilverstar: May 15, 2005, 4:02:59 AM
i like it :) it seems so innocent. and the little boy doesn't know about the undercurrents...=)

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But Of Souls We Share
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~shadowedwintersun:iconshadowedwintersun: May 15, 2005, 3:01:51 PM
:)

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I shall give myself to the one i love,
my heart, my soul,
shall be his....
:heart: =braidy :heart:
~sniffin-sherbert:iconsniffin-sherbert: May 16, 2005, 9:36:48 AM
I really like this. Great stuff :heart:
Will check out the rest of your stuff :)
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~the-figurehead:iconthe-figurehead: Jun 1, 2005, 1:49:27 AM
A deep piece, very moving. It pains a sad picture all too easily. Nice poem.
~shadowedwintersun:iconshadowedwintersun: Jun 14, 2005, 2:12:09 AM
:) thanks

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I shall give myself to the one i love,
my heart, my soul,
shall be his....
:heart: =braidy :heart:
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